11
Jan
10

While riding back..

When I looked in the rear view mirror
targeted at her reflection
Bike ride was no more a fun
I found something was missing!
Nothing was in my favor
as if her missing face was teasing!

I went to same cafe shop,
where we had endless talks,
that Garlic toast with extra cheese
But I missed her a lot when i said
“A table for two, please!”

I stopped at the shop
The same old Ice-cream place
asked for the regular we had!
Ice-cream was no more fun,
I ended up staring at her face
in the second unused spoon
that I ordered for her by mistake!

Finally, I dialed, redialed..
She was already out of reach
I gave up and started for home
It is difficult when you ride back,
Dropping your loved one on a Bus Stand!

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4 Responses to “While riding back..”


  1. 1 Shweta Iyer
    January 12, 2010 at 8:54 pm

    A poem is considered to be worth reading when you feel the words written by the poet and when it touches your soul.
    This is one such poem.
    Expressive n prosaic.
    Applause!

    • January 17, 2010 at 1:57 pm

      Thank you! you and your comments both inspire me to write such poems..

  2. January 14, 2010 at 2:17 am

    Did you write this? It’s lovely.

    • January 17, 2010 at 1:59 pm

      Yes, I wrote it! Thanks for reading and appreciating.
      For more such poems, please click on “poem” tag in my blog!
      Thanks once again!


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