You are still in debt
Coz of promises you made
your eyes promised me of your beauty
your skin promised me of your presence..

You are still in debt
Coz of the things you have rented
for a place in my heart
for the thoughts in my mind..

You are still in debt
Coz of my possessions you borrowed
for all my memories you took away
for all my moments you spent..

You are still in debt
Coz I had everything
Now as I don’t have you
I am left with nothing..
Just like this tree,
I am left with nothing..


12 Responses to “Debt..”

  1. 1 Shweta Iyer
    March 17, 2010 at 1:42 am

    Unique, heartfelt & an honest attempt.
    Your poems are light and easy to read & are filled with imagery.
    They are worth saving in the home library for ever. I have yet to come across a dull article of yours.
    Wonderful work. Keep it up!


    • March 18, 2010 at 12:55 am

      Thank you! I hope I come out with many!

  2. March 17, 2010 at 1:45 am

    beautiful lines and a lot of depth as usual with most of ur poems..

    • March 18, 2010 at 12:56 am

      Thank you sirji! 🙂

  3. March 17, 2010 at 3:32 am

    a lovely poem, well written.

    • March 18, 2010 at 12:56 am

      Thank you wordwand!

  4. 7 Samrudh
    March 17, 2010 at 1:01 pm

    different perspective.
    perspectives, u can actually also write the counter side.
    the other person owes u so much. but is he/she any bit rich in the end?

    • March 18, 2010 at 12:57 am

      haha! true! Never thought of ‘rich’ perspective!

  5. 9 gaurav
    March 18, 2010 at 6:26 pm

    good work…im might copy paste it somewer, so plz dnt mind…eventually it might help ur friend yaar..

    • March 18, 2010 at 7:10 pm

      hehe.. i won’t mind dude.. if your successful then remember my commission.. 1 Hong-Thong! 😀

  6. 11 ashutosh
    March 19, 2010 at 9:22 pm

    dardi re dardi….

    good one…!! bharich !!

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