01
May
10

I should die..

Why it is always that
before I breath
you sigh..

Why it is always that
before I get hurt
you lie..

Why it is always that
before I argue
you justify..

Why it is always that
before I even try
you cry..

Why it is always
I feel, I pray and I wish
that before you say goodbye
I should die..

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8 Responses to “I should die..”


  1. May 1, 2010 at 4:50 am

    Your poem reminded me of an old relationship…not very fond memories….but you captured some essential elements of the relationship in your poem…so well presented here….thanks!

    • May 1, 2010 at 11:58 am

      oops.. sorry!! 😀 Thanks for the compliments.. Just going through your blog! I think I will take a day off to read your blog! Its worth!

  2. 3 Ashutosh
    May 1, 2010 at 11:50 am

    good one !!!!

    Liked the last para… completes the poem in all dimensions !!

    • May 1, 2010 at 11:59 am

      Thanks man! Yeah, last line is very special!!

  3. 5 gaurav rawal
    May 1, 2010 at 1:43 pm

    finally…ur back…n back in a style…good poem dude..!!!

    • May 1, 2010 at 7:12 pm

      thanks man! its an outcome of lot of pegs! seriously! 😛

  4. 7 Avishek
    May 1, 2010 at 2:42 pm

    Good one dude… Am not a big fan of poetry but liked this one!

    • May 1, 2010 at 7:12 pm

      so I am capturing the untapped market then 😛 thanks for the compliment man.. and thanks for reading too!!!!


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